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Our Heroine. Our future. Our only hope.
Is that a new haircut or something?
1875 x 2200 zip can be downloaded in our files section (much more detailed): http://EdenEclipse.com
Hi, finally here she is, our protagonist Lieutenant Amber E. Hawk.
Any comments? Don''t like the shape of her nose? I would appreciate your feedback very much. Hopefully we will keep that quality when integrating her into Genesis Classic.
Sincerely,
Beren Baumgartner < alias "§oµlmas+eR" >
______________________________________________
http://www.Beren.net - Design, Art & Animation
http://www.Mediatory.net - Advanced Web design
http://www.EdenEclipse.com - the SCI FI Saga
Very nice pic, and VERY nice site. Other than the massive amount of spelling errors, it''s very professional.
G''luck,
-Alamar
G''luck,
-Alamar
First of all, let me say that this is better than any 3-d work I''ve done! I love her eyes and hair. Now, if you want people to suggest changes, these are the changes I would make, most of them small:
feet a bit longer
greaves larger at knees
maybe make legs longer proportional to body?
smooth out that angle that shows up on the right side of her waist by raising the bottom of the ribcage
bottom curve of breasts a little more abrupt
indent to show underarms
when her arms are up that high, the curve of her shoulders should be visible
center of shirt collar a bit lower
biceps a bit larger and/or forearms a bit smaller (in diameter)
jaw narrowed slightly
corners of mouth raised slightly.
narrow bridge of nose slightly or darken skin there
eyebrows a little more arched
As usual, feel free to ignore any or all suggestions.
feet a bit longer
greaves larger at knees
maybe make legs longer proportional to body?
smooth out that angle that shows up on the right side of her waist by raising the bottom of the ribcage
bottom curve of breasts a little more abrupt
indent to show underarms
when her arms are up that high, the curve of her shoulders should be visible
center of shirt collar a bit lower
biceps a bit larger and/or forearms a bit smaller (in diameter)
jaw narrowed slightly
corners of mouth raised slightly.
narrow bridge of nose slightly or darken skin there
eyebrows a little more arched
As usual, feel free to ignore any or all suggestions.
Sunandshadow, thank you very much for the suggestions!
I have forwarded them to our 3D artist Democritus.
If anyone is interested in joining our team, we have open positions, just
take a look at our website.
Alamar, was my English sooo bad? o_O
Sorry... *snief*
Sincerely,
Beren Baumgartner < alias "§oµlmas+eR" >
______________________________________________
http://www.Beren.net - Design, Art & Animation
http://www.Mediatory.net - Advanced Web design
http://www.EdenEclipse.com - the SCI FI Saga
I have forwarded them to our 3D artist Democritus.
If anyone is interested in joining our team, we have open positions, just
take a look at our website.
Alamar, was my English sooo bad? o_O
Sorry... *snief*
Sincerely,
Beren Baumgartner < alias "§oµlmas+eR" >
______________________________________________
http://www.Beren.net - Design, Art & Animation
http://www.Mediatory.net - Advanced Web design
http://www.EdenEclipse.com - the SCI FI Saga
Not worry in your english, because many in the forum don''t speak english.. ;-)
How vertex and poly? And how textures?.. ok the model seem very good, like Dino Crisis..
How vertex and poly? And how textures?.. ok the model seem very good, like Dino Crisis..
Model has been done in MAX.
And I skinned it with Photoshop 5.5.
She''s approx. 1000 polys.
Any further comments suggestions? ^_^
Sincerely,
Beren Baumgartner < alias "§oµlmas+eR" >
______________________________________________
http://www.Beren.net - Design, Art & Animation
http://www.Mediatory.net - Advanced Web design
http://www.EdenEclipse.com - the SCI FI Saga
And I skinned it with Photoshop 5.5.
She''s approx. 1000 polys.
Any further comments suggestions? ^_^
Sincerely,
Beren Baumgartner < alias "§oµlmas+eR" >
______________________________________________
http://www.Beren.net - Design, Art & Animation
http://www.Mediatory.net - Advanced Web design
http://www.EdenEclipse.com - the SCI FI Saga
wow...looks kinda similar to my girl model:
very cool though. keep up the good work (or should i say that to Democritus?)
-Luxury
Edited by - Luxury on July 12, 2001 6:16:48 PM
very cool though. keep up the good work (or should i say that to Democritus?)
-Luxury
Edited by - Luxury on July 12, 2001 6:16:48 PM
Luxury, sorry but I couldn''t download your girl picture. Have you checked the link? It''s broken.
Someone said that her crotch would be too low. Well... I don''t think so...
Sincerely,
Beren Baumgartner < alias "§oµlmas+eR" >
______________________________________________
http://www.Beren.net - Design, Art & Animation
http://www.Mediatory.net - Advanced Web design
http://www.EdenEclipse.com - the SCI FI Saga
Someone said that her crotch would be too low. Well... I don''t think so...
Sincerely,
Beren Baumgartner < alias "§oµlmas+eR" >
______________________________________________
http://www.Beren.net - Design, Art & Animation
http://www.Mediatory.net - Advanced Web design
http://www.EdenEclipse.com - the SCI FI Saga
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